Another EXTRA-ordinary piece. Had me longing for the next line after reading the prior. Great use of words-Hooked me right in 8-)

Wow... that was so amazing. Keep up the good writing!

Interesting poem, a bit on the /dark/ side, but very interesting. A lot of nice rhyme, though the rhythm seems to break unintentionaly from time to time.

wonderful,ineffeble,beautyful

absolutely loved it. It's a beautiful poem.

This stuff is really deep. It reminds me of a relationship i once had. Millie u should really send some of your work into competitions. This kind of writing will get you very far.

thanks for reviewing. this one's nice... sort of haunting. the beginning was really..[i dunno how to explain!] but i dont think the title's appropriate, as in it dint end very well.

wow! that was a really cool poem. I love. . . eyes. if that makes any sense. good job on capturing a moment!

rhyming structure is good, and great focus on a job