I just thought this story was really, really sweet. I loved all the characters (River was my favorite), and you developed their relationships beautifully. That's really all I have to say.

I like it better without Wynn.

Oh, he should totally go for Evan.

lol, Wynn had his chance

This was a pretty good story. I was hooked till the end, especially for the Wynn and Evan bits. Thank you for creating such a masterpiece.

heheh.. think i'm going to be late for work because i woke up and decided to read the last 2 chapters of this story :P

anyway, i loved it. lots of crazy couples :) though i am kind of sad that you didn't go into details with any of them. by the way, i was very surprised that river didn't end up with either wynn or evan. quite original, aren't you? :)) i mean in most slash it is easy to guess the couples from the start, but not here.

Great story, keep up the good work.

Where is chapter 7? I am at chapter 7 and it is not showing up.

Once Perry was mentioned in this, I automatically made a connection with "The Goddamn Muffin", and I'm happy too see that I was right! Its good to know that Teigue and Marin did indeed hook up!
And then I thought back to the muffin reference... lol! Really cute!

You're a really good writer! Now, off to the next chapter! Yip yip! (...^_^+)

I think that Evan is so CUTE! I really hope that River gets together with Evan, but I highly doubt that they will. I have an incredibly strong feeling that he'll end up with Wynn, now that he's slowly (and obliviously) reciprocating his feelings.

This story is great so far! I can't wait to see where you take this!

Hm how do I say that… First of all, I like this story very much. There are some very realistic and entertaining dialogues and interesting characters.

Second, I was very disappointed as I realised, after some chapters (I even peeked at the end of the story), that you intended to pair Evan with Wynn. I hoped for Evan/River, even a threesome would have been okay. In fact, I was so disappointed, that I abandoned this story totally. However because I still thought about it a couple of days later, I went back and read it. And I loved all your pairings the way they were. (You know why I thought you planned a Even/River story? Because of the endearments. They completely disappeared after chapter 2, much like Stef, your main female character. lol)

Which is my third point. There are some inconsistencies in your story. But they are easily ignored. A small example: River and Perry painted the living room a light blue, River even had a small blue smudge on his cheek. But later, when Casey first enters the room, its walls are beige or some other shade of brown. As I said, it’s easy to skip.

I look forward to reading your other stories. Even if I don’t leave a review (I’m terribly lazy) I’m sure they are great.

I really enjoyed this story but my interest totally dropped when I realized River and Wynn werent going to be together - I dunno why :L

Wasnt as satisfying but an awesome story and great characters

I love this story, it was amazing and I really enjoyed it the way you bought the characters to life was really good.

Its true that there isn't a thirteenth floor ,but the people on the fourteenth floor...They all know where they are...

Thanks. A very good story. I'm off to check the others you've written. :)