 Arn 2005-11-12 . chapter 1you repeated words...like 3 times...but good job anyway. I liked it, anyway. Awesome, repetition is actually cool in this poem. Small, but full of meaning. AND fun to read. NOT boring, like all of your other stories. More fun than you, probably. Hmm, I wonder why. LOL.
Awesome, you rock, rock on, do more poems like these and I will post more reviews like these (not bad ones). So I liked this, in a weird sort of way.
(P.S y don't you review some of my stories SIGNED and NOT anonymously as you be Manda and Lulu or those 2 **? I don't want anonymous reviews I want YOUR review. Even though they come from the same person) |