wow! this poem is amazing with all the perfect imagery and the metaphor of hide and seek. i love the last line 'u were never alone'. great poem! plus, thanx AGAIN for ur awesome reviews. they r fabulous and really cheering. anyway, fantastic poem!

LOL!! i love this poem, it's going on my favs. nothing bad to say, too many good things to start

tutu here. i like this poem. i didnt scare me like bridgets :). and yea gramatical error. wow i luv this. stupid correcting dumb. last line. its were not where. oh im so good!! nice poem. dont get the olly olly thingy.

Wow, very inspirational. Only thing I don't get is why you said 'hind' alot instead of 'hide' was it a mis-spelling?