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please! 2009-11-24 . chapter 1
PLEASE WILL YOU UPLOAD THIS?


i mean, its really good so far, so please finish this story
pinkstarpatricia 2009-08-26 . chapter 7
It's been a while since you've updated. I hope you do update soon. I really want to know what happens soon. I want Max and Andrea together. :D
Bill Kaulitz 2009-06-09 . chapter 7
4 years passed and not an update...
well its okay
i guess i can live but the curiosity is eating me alive and i want a happy ending :]
CrazyInAGoodWay 2009-05-17 . chapter 7
i dont know if you know this but its been 7 1/2 months since uve updated... and i really want you to update more... ya so... um... UPDATE
sw448 2009-04-19 . chapter 7
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
this is good. I want to know what happens next
i actually liked the dan/Andrea dynamic till he went all creepy. =D

.sw
Miz Calixte 2009-04-08 . chapter 7
so you going to finish this story anytime soon? Because you went and did a cliffy on me!
(Pouting)
I'm sad now.
Its a good story! i want to know what happens!!
Pwease finish it??!

Miz Calixte
Bonedigger 2009-03-25 . chapter 7
I like this story a lot, and it's quite true to life. Doesn't matter if you used to be fat, or you used to be the geek, or you used to be flat chested, guys forget that they used to pick on you. I didn't read chapter 7 before it was rewritten but I think I prefer it without the rape. A lot of authors try to make their stories more dramatic by throwing in rape, and it just trivialises it. I think you made a good decision taking it out. I'll be waiting on more chapters x
Arashiku 2009-03-01 . chapter 1
I like your story a lot :) But it started to get a little strange like at the 6th chapter and it kinda made me not really wanna read the rest I mean I really love the beginning when she went to camp and I totally thought she would be with Dimitri XD I was wrong! I love how she was still young in the beginning but when she was more mature in the end it was just...wow this is so hard to explain lol but your writing was terrific :) Keep on the good work

~Yo Fav Writer Lol: Michi XP
sarcasm is my middle name 2009-02-07 . chapter 7
wow, she has been getting a lot of bad attention!
Thanks for the story!
by the way, does phil actually like andrea for herself or for her body?
hydora 2008-12-23 . chapter 7
er...the whole "Dan" incident was freaky 0_0
thank god he didn't rape her.
Kimera77 2008-12-11 . chapter 7
Great development! Didn't expect that! Keep it up!
- MyDecoy - 2008-11-08 . chapter 7
I loved reading this so far,
fantastic writer =P
justdazed 2008-10-31 . chapter 7
aww...max is sweet
please mae Andy fall for Max though...not Phil
please update!
Silent Grenade 2008-10-29 . chapter 7
OMG. PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY.
SoulSam 2008-09-16 . chapter 7
this has got to be one of my all time favourite fics. i loved every chapter and i can't believe there's only 7! :(
i'm dying to read more, and i know it's a long shot since it's been almost 3 years since you've updated, but please please please don't abandon this story! it is too good a fic to not finish...i'd really love to see how this continues, and how max and andrea's relationship progresses into somethine more than friendship. update soon? i'm ever so hopeful! lol
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