Again, just the surface, or is it just me? Anyway, nafifil ko ang nadarama ng ginamit mong persona. :D

Hi! =) Cygna from Ravenclaw here. Anyway, your poem reminds me of a hodgepodge of OPM songs. Medyo na-weirdohan ako sa last line "Kinalimot ang iyong pangako..." somehow it doesn't make sense to me grammatically. Or maybe that's grammatically sound already; Filipino isn't my strongest suit. All in all, very expressive. Keep it up! =)

P.S. Please read and review my stories [especially 'Unmarked Boundaries'] when you have the time. Thanks. =)