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| Cleopatra Wanna-be 2006-11-17 ch 1,   | ::blink, blink:: Thank god I already passed through that awful bad-emo-poetry stage. And it was bad. Very, very bad. Like rotten eggs and eggplants. But this is good. Very good. Very, very good. This alone is almost enough to atone for all that horrid stuff some people call poetry. P.S. And to all the people who have not seen the light some like to call 'proper English" (I'm not saying I have), I don't mean all emo kids, just about 99.87% of them. |
| happy thing 2005-11-01 ch 1, | *Dies* That is wonderful! Oh my, where to begin?! It's so stuffed full of rage and hatred and so TRUE. I totally know where you're coming from. And you manage to rhyme, flow, and set the clones straight all in one go! Amazing! *Dies again* |
| Yelizaveta 2005-10-25 ch 1, | i seriously love this poem. it's true too. |
| Suicidal Skies 2005-06-28 ch 1, | Divine! It's bitter and angsty. I liked the.. because of her, because of himbecause of you, because of them My favourtie lines in the whole thing. Very nice. |
| DevilDragon of Pain 2005-06-27 ch 1, | Chills. Definate chills from this poem. It's strong and in your face. This is certainly one of your best works. SCORE: 10/10 The Critic, Devil Dragon of Pain |
| nevermore, the silent cry 2005-06-25 ch 1, | jesus christ chika, chill. the point of this place is not to be the best, it's a way to express yourself. people are allowed to say/write what they want |
| kaiialyne 2005-06-23 ch 1, | Well, aren't you cheerful. Cut the emo kids some slack. Every once in a very long while, one of them comes up with something decent. Not often. But sometimes. |