You often portray cliches, but your wording is fresh and sensual so the reader doesn't notice at all. That is why your stuff is such a favorite of mine! :D *smiles*

very touching and real. The flow and the emotions are great!

~Sorrow~

aweness.

this poem is awesome, just meh.

i love it.

I like this a lot...it's really sad and in a sense peaceful. Good job.

i like it. good job!!