Tears in my eyes. I know what you mean about time blending, I think that's such a good explanation.$

this sings (sadly, that is) of broken hearts and shatterings, memories and loss.. so direct, and yet you capture the sense of the days having been lost and the way they kind of blended when they were around. beautiful, in pain.

mezzie

I've read this about 10 times and it keeps getting better and better. I just love all the examples and "quiet ones wrapped into each other" its beautiful, painful and just *sigh*, if this was a cake it would be double chocolate chip with extra icing served in a gold paper case. get what i mean? yes its THAT good

this made me smile. you really have a way with words.

I love the endless in this with the days and days...

Seriously, I've been staring at this computer screen trying to think of something to type without sounding like an idiot. I just realized that in a review of something so full of raw, credible emotion I'm going to sound like one anyway. That poem was amazing, and if I could put you on my favorite authors list twice, I would.

Hey! omg, this is one of the best freaken poems I've ever read. It was so deep and it really hit home. Not for me, but it really reminded me of my sister... it really did. It was soo good, you're a really great writer. I like your style. Did something in ur life make u write this? J/w u don't have ot tell me... anyway, I'll quit babbling! -L.K.