great piece! i don't really know what to say, it speaks for itself

Sounds so rejuvinating.

Again, well done for experimenting with formats. This piece is an odd one though, a bit like an equation... but I do like the meaning behind it and the last two lines are profound.

Jenna xoxo

lovely.:)

very touching. It has that perfect ending. You have outdone yourself once again! great job

~Sorrow~

o i love this..it's beautiful.