 Calliope Foster 2005-06-28 . chapter 1LOL! Funny, but in a way it certainly isn't. Society is insane, isn't it? |
 account not in use 2005-06-27 . chapter 1So much apathetic anger...I love the flow, wonderful. Thanks for your reviews! |
 Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-27 . chapter 1Portrays society very successfully. |
 AntiPleasure 2005-06-26 . chapter 1I like how you've experimented with different sorts of styles, and they work quite well. I like the timid nature you used to describe a fake person, most likely a drained plastic girl, and you've portrayed it well.
Jenna xoxo |
 Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-25 . chapter 1very true and very real. I like that. You have a real good talent for this. touching work
~Sorrow~ |
 Aquafied 2005-06-24 . chapter 1hah, this reminds me of myself.
except i dont want to look like a ** and i dont cover myself in plastic or makeup.
but you have to think about it, that everyone at one point in their life, wants to look like somebody else.
interesting and true.
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 sempre-e-por-sempre 2005-06-24 . chapter 1i love it!!...i love how you separate what society is saying...and what it really does to who you are...i love it!! keep writing! |