i like it! you should write more stories about her!

take your girlfriend vampire hunting - perfect for a romantic first date. :-P

That was interesting, very real.

Hey. Wow that's great.

Are you going to continue this story?

UPDATE UPDATE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ this is too good. plz . for the sake of gerards hottness, the story, & my bordum! PLZ plus ya know we all wanna know if gerard & aurora** get out & married ! happily ever after!

very very very good! update soon, and that song definitly rocks. i love it. I have the CD i brought you my bullets, you brought me your love. good CD,

I gotta say, you seem to know how to describe things wisely, and that is always a great talent!

... but beyond that your story kinda sucked... I couldn't tell who was speaking, what was happening, where things were, how the plot developed... basically you took the 5 'W's and the 'H'... and took a humongous writer's shit on them. Not to mention that you seriously need to learn how to use a comma or a semi-colon and where to place your periods.

I gotta say in several instances you just took the plot twists and turns that should normally be long and desciptive, plus your best at being riveting, and smashed them into a:

"Liek... sheez liek toTellie A Vmpyre!"

"You mean the cliche 'mysterious vampire girl that has the totally lame and gothic name of 'Aurora' that apparently can't be some normal name like 99.9% of the the world, as no one actually DOES meet another person called Aurora... bit you stoner dude?"

"Yeah."

"Bummer."

I dunno if you wrote this on Microsoft Word, or in a notepad, but I gotta say that it was EXTREMELY confusing.

Your story rocks arse!

Mary-Sue.

erm sorry about that...it was there... I think it must have deleted it or something...thats really weird. It's .com if this doesn't show up then give me you e-mail adress and I'll e-mail you it... I'm so glad you like it though _

-Krisi X_x

What site? I don't see any site. I do want to read it though. I've fallen in love with it. MCR has infected me.

Actally Gerards eyes sort of change colour and most people have agreed on hazel...but in some pictures they look gren and others more brown *shrugs* my friend swears that a few times they've looked blue...but meh I'm just going to stick with hazel for the story :)

I really like this! One thing though...aren't gerard's eyes green? I swear to god I thought they were green! Now I want to know...grr...lol. Keep this story going! I love that song! It's awesome.

hey! the story is great!i was trying to imagine my self as aurora, lucky girl! and i love my chemical romance, Gerard is so cute (well for me his cute...and hot...and sexy...okay okay i better stop) keep up the good work!,