Reviews for A Candle for Alla

BlueJayWalking 2005-09-23 ch 1,	abuseThis is so sad. I love your choice of words: "each poem a dried tearstain on my cheek." The simple elegance in them brings out the heartfelt emotions in this poem beautifully. Oh, was "crevaces" meant to be "crevices"? "A breeze/laden with memories and flowers hangs in/space you once filled." Wonderfully poignant. Keep writing!
RainDancer 2005-08-19 ch 1,	abuseI love this. I assume you knew Alla, I didn't know her very well but I enjoyed her company and we were good acquaintances. I'm really glad you wrote this in your memory. It's beautiful.
miss lavender 2005-06-29 ch 1,	abuseAmazing imagery. I'm in awe... lav
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-06-27 ch 1,	abuseNice diction and imagery.
Corynna Analiese 2005-06-24 ch 1,	abuseThis was beautiful... your use of language is exquisite. Thank you for sharing this with us! ~Corynna Analiese~
Emilie Aurel 2005-06-24 ch 1,	abuseWow, my favorite type of poem--free verse, choppy sentences with lots of analogy and well-written descriptions. I love it, you did an amazing job. Keep up the great work, and to my favorite stories this will go! Beautiful job! **~Emilie Aurel
lovelikeamixtape 2005-06-24 ch 1,	abusebeautiful. flawless. painful. this is amazing.