Hey Abbagirl,this poem is great! You're waay smarter than the idoits in our school, and you manage to come up with great things even surrounded by idoits (my air headedness doesn't count!!)

You proved me wrong that all of your poetry would have a kind of dark feel! This one is very lovely. The rythm might have been a little weak at beginning, but you were focusing more on the rhyming, and then as you got more into the poem it improved. You really should stop saying that you suck at poetry in your author notes all the time, because you don't! You really are gifted, So keep writing, and I'm sure you'll keep getting even better!Cya! (I've run out of time for reviews today, but I'm sure I'll come back and read some more of your work another time!)~SCR

haha... you don't suck. trust me. i've been feeling like this a lot lately... erm... without actually knowing the guy i want to love me. (yes agian, i don't make sense in a review. go figure)

but this is a really good poem... don't get down on yourself!

*Lauren

This poem is definitely not as bad as you think it is. I actually thought it was quite good. I liked the title and first line the best. It has a nice ring to it.

this didn't suck at all, it was sweet.