i like this a lot... it's kinda vague, but at the same time i totally know what you're getting at.(if that makes any sense at all... lol) great job!

*Lauren

Very interesting...I especially liked the lines "The mask that people pull, The false facades they wear. The secrets they try to hide" that was awesome. I do wish that you hadn't put the author's note in the middle though, it interrupts your beautiful poem :) Wonderful job!

Good poem.

I like this one too, you make it sound so welcoming, I'd be tempted to go there too.

Nice assonance.