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| Chauden Nemodi 2006-06-16 ch 1,   | The two long- one short phrases really work well for this. ^_^ Great job Pookie, my dear. |
| Captain Blunderbuss 2005-08-13 ch 1, | I love it! The perfect flow of thought. Just thought and actions and I can see it all so perfectly! I absolutely love it! Just zip zip zip! That is what poetry is! A feeling, a thought and you just have to let it all out! Keep it up! |
| Relayer 2005-06-30 ch 1, | I like the way you write. This flows really well. |
| I can't believe it's over 2005-06-27 ch 1, | i loved it, very cute. keep writing :) |
| midsea 2005-06-24 ch 1, | Agh. I love this. It was fun to read. Lovely, lovely, lovely. |