that was really good. i love the whole 'i did not say goodbye, i need closure' thing, it is always
strong.

i suggest you read my story 'mending what has broken' i think u would like it hint, hint u might even wanna review! :)

ur really talented, keep writing
silently watching

That was unbelievably good! I cant wait to read more! Keep writing! Will you R&R one of mine?

I've been that guy... Very touching, powerful. The end of everything, the beginning of nothing. But something always begins again. Keep it up.

That was gorgeous: very dense with emotion. I loved sense of time running out.

Oh my...that was very emotional. I never felt so connected with two characters. This was an incredible moment--and you wrote it beautifully. Great work on this.