Reviews for Guardian of the Sacred

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Casey Drake 2007-06-08 ch 40,	abuse"You killed him... it's not your fault"?? Heh?? is confuzzled Otherwise, a good but bitter set of chapters. :) CD
Mei1105 2007-05-21 ch 40,	abuseMy God you're alive! Yay! throws party Joseph is dead! But he was such a good character! :( muses jangle wedding bells tauntingly over Calius's head Can't wait to read more. Don't worry about irregular updates, it happens to everyone. :)
Alyssa 2007-05-20 ch 40, anon.	abuseIt's 2 in the morning and I have to be up at 7 for work. This story was good enough to keep me up well past my normal bedtime. Unfortunately, now I'm too sleepy to offer any criticism with any real substance to it. In any case, I loved it. The only complaint I have is that there were a couple times where you introduced a concept and didn't explain it at all (like, what is a lauma?) And in some chapter or another you used "heal" instead of "heel" in a sentence. Anyway, that's it. Very good, overall. Thanks for sharing!
InnocentSinIncarnate 2006-05-12 ch 38,	abuse...finally caught up. Really looking forward to the next chapter, so update soon! That's awesome that you were a finalist in the science fair!! Silvaticus isn't dead, right?
InnocentSinIncarnate 2006-05-12 ch 34,	abuseWhere do you come up with the names of landforms? Everything seems really good so far--you release information about the plotline slowly, but with great timing, and then you also catch the interest of the reader at the same time. That's easier said than done. I have a hard time releasing information gradually...
InnocentSinIncarnate 2006-05-12 ch 32,	abuseAw, it's cute how Kellan's tigers are protective of her...and I suck at solving riddles--hate thinking -too- deeply. Great chapter...uh (is not good at reviewing). I like your whole elemental system thing--it comprises of its own original elements instead of the common elements usually used, and then the weapons having personalities is really interesting, too. But there's not much action there... Well, I'll read on!
InnocentSinIncarnate 2006-05-12 ch 29,	abuseIt's been a long time...I wonder if you even remember me? Sorry, anyways, I really like this chapter. You have an empath! I love empathic people! Ok, that sounded weird...
Big Guv 2006-04-24 ch 35,	abuseThanks for updating. I thought that you forgot about our own story for a while. It's still looking good. I think I know the riddle, but I'm not for sure. I'll ask you soon if it's right. :-) Keep up the great work. Big Guv
Big Guv 2006-04-04 ch 34,	abuseHey are you going to update your story soon? I'm looking forward to more chapters. Hope you update soon.
Big Guv 2006-03-15 ch 1,	abuseThanks for the review, but I think you review the wrong story. (Forever Fantasy) but it's all good. Oh and are you going to make a sequel to this story? I hope so. And if you'd like me to give you a list of literary agents, look on my profile and e-mail me telling me that you'd like it. You got great talent and I think you should put it to work. :-)
Big Guv 2006-03-12 ch 37,	abuseI love this story and how you write it wit so much detail. Do you think you can read my Forever Fantasy story and tell me what you think about it? I'd like it if I could get some advice from you. Your like a master a writing great stories. lol :-) Catch ya later. Johnny Lee, A.K.A Big Guv
Big Guv 2006-03-12 ch 38,	abuseYou know how to put so much detail into your story. I love that! And that's also something I think I need to work on and that's adding much more details to my characters' characteristics. Great story, and I'm glad that I had a chance to read it before you ever thought about pulling off the site. Your great at this, make sure you keep it up. I think that you should try to go professional with this. If you want, I can give you the addresses, phone numbers, names, web-sites, and e-mail address of literary agents. I have a little over five hundred different people who represent literary companies. This story is gold and I think that you should try to do something with it. I animated movie, video game, book, something. Keep it up okay? Cuz I'll love to read more of your stories. Looks like you have a fan on your hands. :-)>Johnny Lee A.K.A: Big Guv
Mei1105 2006-03-09 ch 38,	abuseCongratulations on the ISEF! I got my january exam results today. I got an A and a C in Media Studies and a C and an E in Business Studies. I'm so relieved thats over with! This was a good chapter (how can you call your work crap?! Your chapters never are!). And it had a minor skirmish. I wanna see more of that! So do the muses. Fred: It fuels the imagination it does! Helen: The International Science and Engineering Fair. Sounds impressive! Go you! Don't worry about irregular updates. Just as long as you don't abandon us completly! Fred: Which we know you would never do! :) We'll be waiting for the next update!
Casey Drake 2006-03-08 ch 38,	abusegrr... we meet the Duke... tacklesdukejumpsondukedancesonduke :) CD
Mei1105 2006-02-06 ch 37,	abuse:Snicker: Natasha's got my name! So that's how they send messages! I love phoenix's. My novel that I'm working on is called Phoenix Star. The character list will be really helpful. Thanks a lot! :Muses: Guten Tag! We love this story! We also love cookies but that's not relivant right now. :Tash: Update soon! I want cookies now... damn it! :)

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