This is fantastic. I’ve always loved characters like Jess, the strong, ambitious women type characters. I think your writing is amazing and I especially love your opening. It really caught my attention. I can’t wait to finish reading it all!!

Hi! Finally, an unbiased review. ^_^

The events in your story were thrilling and heart-pounding. I enjoyed every moment of it. I liked the way you presented details, very straightforward and objective. I saw a few typos, though.

Update soon! I'll always be here to read, although as early as now I would say "sorry" if I were not to review your upcoming chapters immediately.

Talk to you later. ^_~

~Doray

dude. it's still so totally cool. i'd've probably slacked off around chapter 3 and given up...go you!

It's been a while, friend (can I call you that...?)!

So far you have managed to keep me fairly interested in this story. You write very well. The endings are set up just perfect to where I am left anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Seems a bit blunt- you just outright stated that he made her uneasy, could have been a tad bit less obvious. Um.

It really is sort of odd that she's so interested in finding out who he is when she was planning on killing him anyway... Some sort of motivation for that would have been well placed.

And that's it. ^.^ Stop leaving semi-cliffhangers. xD

bounty hunting! kewl. so i guess the cab driver is gonna like attack her now? FIGHTING! please?

-blink-

Too short! Did you ever say why anyone would want to kill him? ::scans memory::

And is this going to turn into some 'Wants to discredit chick' thing?

YAY for chapter 4! this story gets cooler with each word. PLEASE keep writing. PLEASE!

cold showers! yes! and lol that banana thing...i couldn't stop laughing for like five minutes...! but oh my gosh! you must keep writing! i want to know what happens, i want to know who said the "**", i want to know!

oh yeah, and 'unasae' is basically elvish for 'don't quit/give in', directed to either one specific person or to a general audience (as best as i can explain it).

Ooh, I like. I like lots. -waits for new chapter-

haha, I swear I didn't think of that 'till you mentioned it. I tried to use names of people I don't know...I don't know a richard...a Puppet maybe, but no richard, lol.

Richard? Interesting. KEEP WRITING!

KEEP WRITING!