Wow. I really like this. It's one of my favorite poems you have written!

I like how you formatted the words to draw attention to them. The vague imagery that filled this poem was beautful. The line "As good as a four-letter word" is very informative and imaginative. I loved the last two lines, they made the reader stop and think about the meaning behind them. The dashes were a bit odd, but like you said, FP.com eats formatting :P Overall, a beautiful and poignant poem, that's going on favorites.

Wow. That is really cool. And really creepy, too. But, I like it. Very much. Yaay!!

i liked this very much.

its morbid, but then again, thats my mood thats eating me.

This is very good. Perhaps one of your best. It's stark and bleak and I like the formatting. *impressed*

Your best so far I think.

'-o--d

-o--n

-s-u

-e-o

-a--r'

I didn't work out what that mean but otherwise, the poem is good. It's cleer and understated, and not overly dramatic and mature. I like it.

Excellent poem. “We play fetch with the bones of yesterdayOn the banks of Styx”“I can see the gaps in your teeth.Is this where all your lies escape from?” For some reason I really like these lines. They stick with the reader and are excellent metaphors/analogies.

This is awesome, I had a little bit of a hard time reading the last part, but I got it after i put wrote it down.I like the formatting a lot, good job

fantastic. very creative with the formating!

SP