great poem!

nice work. i really like your work. keep writing.

blood roses and a decaying corpse. ~ erAced ~

Eh heh heh, this makes me warm and fuzzy inside (perhaps because I just read American Psycho, but whatever). Rhyme scheme was fine, not forced, which is brilliant. Ah, just though I'd let you know that To Kill a Child actually has a first chapter now . . . after about two years . . . *eh heh*

very dark, but i liked it! awesome poem!

0_0 ... remind me never to get on your bad side.

Really well done. I like the rhyming scheme, it gives it a kind of song-y feel. :hug: Keep it up!

~Ponteh out.

I like this, the feeling to it it very strong and the words move very nicely.

This was a wonderful poem, with amazing, if gruesome, imagery.:)One small typo though. "Sitting beside your blood corpse..." Shouldn't that be "bloody corpse?" Or is it just me?

very vivid and theres this feeling of desperation in ur poem. awesome work