Hey I love your story please posr soonluvlexy

You should break up this big paragraph I think. It's harder to read and it was kinda confusing when you flipped from Monique to Astrid.

Premonition. There's my correction for this chapter. Otherwise, Very good. Can't wait to read on. ~A.E.Venturi

Ooh, great chapter. I love that you can add slight humor (The first date thing) to a serious situation. Can't wait for chapter six!

W00t! Awesome! please continue!

It's Excellent! I love how your dual-personalities can be expressed in both of the twins. I'm interested in seeing where you go with the Monique Aura thing. Just one suggestion, you might want to write it some other way. It's rather confusing. (That may just be me though!haha!)

No.. it is Magickal. This is an amazing story; keep it up. You can count on at least this reader to continue reading. I do believe in magick and this is a wonderful read.

If I ever find something to critque you on, I shall let you know. For now, continue with what you're doing! Description is great and dialogue believable.

umm...rightso until this chapter I didn't know what a coven was. As it is, I"m sorry but I have to stop reading this. I don't believe in witchcraft and will not associate with anything involving it, particularly because I'm a Christian, and proud of it. You have talent in writing, I can only hope that you'll put it to some better use.

oh, hot guy! good stuff. I really liked how you seriously change the attitude of the character. Not many people can do that, where you read the words and you feel what the char is feeling. With astrid you feel depressed, and with monique you feel...preppy, i guess. Off for the next chap! Ciao

I have decided to review for every chapter because I feel that the story deserves more credit. However, at the moment, I'm sounding quite unlike myself, so I'll stop.

It was awesome! I really like it, and I'm quite curious what the several references to "magickal" (which, btw, is spelled wrong. Sorry! I'm an english freak, lol. It's just "magical"...so yeah.) could mean, and I'm assuming that they'll play a more important part in the rest of the story. And given the summary as well, it prolly will. I'm off for the next chap! Cya!

Awesome. Please update!

Great story! I love how different Astrid and Monique's personalities are. It's perfect that they hardly get along, because that's reality. Keep writing!

Wow. I Loved this. Update. Very true. I liked it.