A little vague, perhaps include another follow-up to explain your inner torture. Good beginning.

I thought a haiku was only two lines...hmm...

I'm wondering if your bio really expresses your outlook on life. If it is, I'm sorry. You should write more though, I think it might help a bit. Just to get feelings out, of course. yeah, i'm stopping now... Cya

simple but right to the point. u should join w.allpoetry.com