Nice insight, Chris. I like this. It is not your best work, nor my favorite of your work, but it does pose some nice questions. I enjoyed the last three lines the best. Keep writing

Very interesting, but oh, so true. What valiance must lie in such a poet of your... (*ponders*) true (*for lack of a better word*) mind. ~Writer of Darkness~

GREAT! I love this! Write on!

~Anna~