It had a powerful tune to it, emotional, but not too much and a good rythm. Your length was good as well! Great job with this poem! I liked how you expressed yourself! Keep at it and write more! This was good!
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o, i love it. very interesting story going on the whole time, but i love it.~Liz

Amazing. Very good. I loved it all. Beautiful.

I don't see why people whine about 'sweet essence' it keeps the poetic feel in my opinion. Heh. I really love the poem. It's great. I love the "You're selfish and you're such a little boy but the cash is good so I call you." It seems to really pull the poem together. Great job.

Sad it whispers of sorrow...

wow that's really good. great job!

Wow. This would be a kickass song!

You are very good with words. I can see you poems like little stories in my head. This has a nice flow. I envy your poetic abilities. I only wish I could write more ..

this rocks! Thanks for the review~

Oh wow. Very angst and powerful. Good job.

This is a gritty, yet beautiful portrayal. The only thing that I dislike about the poem is the 'sweet essence' part. If she is a prostitute (which I believe she is), I don't feel she would call it 'sweet essence', and anyway, it doesn't seem to match the brazenness that prostitution should seemingly achieve.

i am, most certainly, my own worst critic...but this is still great...you're great...so there ya go...lol

wow.. beautifully written... i like the ending

this was really really good...i mean great...wowie...lol i'm like practically speechless...the only part i didn't like was "his sweet essence" just because it sounds gross, but anyhow...LOVELY! ahh! ok, i'm done gushing now...

Wow...this is powerful. I didn't expect the part about how she really is a prostitute. I like it.