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| Reviews for The Story of Life |
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   Jesse the Storyteller 11/26/05 . chapter 3Very sad, very mournful - I do eblieve that is the point. The repitition really adds to the poem. Pretty decent poem you have here ;) |
| Jesse the Storyteller 11/26/05 . chapter 2 Interesting, especially the last line. Your poems flow together really well almost as if poetry is your mother tongue :P |
| Jesse the Storyteller 11/26/05 . chapter 1 Interesting pictures and imagery here... I like the last line. |
| the naked civil servant 11/16/05 . chapter 1 oh my god, this is actually AMAZING... such a vivid image, i swear, it's so fucking powerful... beautiful. |
| Cloud Burst 8/28/05 . chapter 5 very uplifting and inspiring ) beautiful work! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 8/19/05 . chapter 4 What a beautiful and satisfying closing after all the turmoil and incessant thought. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 8/19/05 . chapter 3 The italics is haunting. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 8/19/05 . chapter 2 I love the style with the passion and the beauty. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 8/19/05 . chapter 1 Suspenseful! |
| Cloud Burst 8/16/05 . chapter 4 i like the ending line of this poem, very strong. brilliant! |
| Cloud Burst 8/16/05 . chapter 3 whoa that is just breathtaking! such intense imagery - i truly love it! |
| Cloud Burst 8/16/05 . chapter 2 sounds sorta like a prayer/hymn. beautiful imagery - i luv sapphires - |
| Cloud Burst 8/16/05 . chapter 1 i just learned a new word today! - scryer. lol! no seriously. anyways really awesome, short but awesome! |
| youzi 8/14/05 . chapter 4 you really have a knack of coming up with wonderful titles to hold your pieces together! i really liked the idea of this piece.. |
| youzi 8/14/05 . chapter 1 intriguing...especially the way you've titled this D |
