oo, heartbreaking. Sad and true and very, very moving. I love it...

I think that this poem is pretty good

This is a very realistic poem. I congradulate you on your talent for writing such vivid feelings so well!

Hey! Yea this poem is really good. Keep up the good work and sorry about the breakup.

Paula

nice, i like how emotional it is. problem is that punctation is wrong(unless you want it read choppy(with lots of pauses))

Nice. You managed to convey the feelings very well.