Wow. I love your poem. It's so depressing. I wish I could write like you. Please keep writing.

Aww!! It's so sad, but so cute at the same time... Great poem. Keep writing!!

Wow, great job. I've had my heart broken plenty of times lately so I can really relate.

Thanx for your review on my song. I appreciate the good feedback! =D

This is beautiful. The way you write...it's like you're telling your life story. REALLY good^^

Beautifully written. One typo("ur" instead of "you're")but nothing too bad. You writing is full of emotion and it commands your reader. Great job.

Please R&R some of my work. I'll return the favor.