it's cute, nice job i really liked it ]

Whimsical, cynical? Can those two go together?

Let us not argue on reality; it certainly worked here, bravo.

If i'm just looking at this without going through the weird-funky-kaleidoscope-thing i call emotions, It's a brilliant piece. But frankly, i've never felt this way so i didn't relate to it.

Ah well. But the messages are cool.

Keep Writing! And Work Hard!

how romantic *sighs dreamily and stared off into the distance* good job!

Hon, you need a new bf, if you keep writing about him, you just keep giving him more power over you.

Beautifully written. I love how down to earth and real the story in this poem is. Thanks for the reviews by the way. Never had I so many from just one person.P

Aww, I enjoyed that one a lot!

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good poem congrates. have a nice day!