Very interesting. So far so good!

I've always been one to enjoy a world in which firearms, blades of steel, and bows were present. However, what is quite easy to have in a turn based RPG is rather difficult to pull off in a story. I will enjoy seeing how you do that in further chapters.

Very nice, go over and check your grammar and such, but a fair story line. A bit vauge so far, but I'm sure it will all be explained.