|Reviews for Sky Blade|
| in theory 9/25/05 . chapter 1
You're right about the flow, unfortunately it's not so lubricated. But your metaphors are really fantastic! I loved this. Great job :)
| syrai 8/22/05 . chapter 1
Man, I love your poems. They're so damn beautiful.
| fearphobic 7/5/05 . chapter 1
i thought it was really well written...beautiful piece actually...keep writing!
| ambiguityy 6/29/05 . chapter 1
powerful description... I can feel the thunder roar its war cry deep and hollow, resonating across the sky. Lightning a screaming whip that lashes through the cavalry of clouds, startling everything in its wake. Rain hammering down hard like an advancing army, cold and furious. Really great poem.
| smile persephone 6/28/05 . chapter 1
It shouldn't flow, thunderstorms and armies don't flow-it's sporadic. Despite the fact that I've seen this metaphor countless times, you tell it well. Nicely done.
| Thornberry 6/27/05 . chapter 1
Nonsence, this flows fine. Very nice. I love your use of metaphor. I envy ur poetry skills...lol
| Ryter 6/27/05 . chapter 1
I am Ryter! And Ryter is me!
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHHA! FEAR THE POWER OF THE SPORK!
And I say, that this is good.
| Nobody-n-Particular 6/27/05 . chapter 1
I like it, esp. the imagery.
| DathomiranSciFiAuthor 6/27/05 . chapter 1
*grins* Lovely description as always. And cool symbolism.
| shadowedstar213 6/26/05 . chapter 1
Interesting thoughts. I envy your amazing talents.
| MIDNIGHT-PIXIE 6/26/05 . chapter 1
i like it-it works-war and storms don't flow-so it really works well-i loved it-great job...