i really like this story, except there were times when the mistakes got on my nerves. lol.

Uhm, but anyways, you should probably change the story's status to "complete" since it's finished.

:)

Kayy, Ciao.

K, this was a good story and a happy one (Thank the Lord! I was getting tired of sad ones.)But I think its really sweet. One thing though. You should really reread your story and fix all the mistakes. Some of them makes it kind of hard to understand. Try to use the person's name when you're talking about them because sometimes you would be talking about Corin, then change paragraphs and use he, so I thought you were still talking about Corin, but really it was Alex. There were a few words missing and you skipped some letters, also using We'll for well and his for he's. Just fix it please so other readers who do not have the great skills of guessing can read this with ease.

Great story. Really good plot and such.
Just a few grammatical errors:
We'll is we all not well
"" These are for when people are speaking not '' those
and when you use his its suppose to be he

ex: ‘We’ll his neither of those things,’
is suppose to be
"Well he's neither of those things,"

neat story :)

You deserve infinitely more reviews! I re-read this story every couple of months and I always fall in love with Alex. You created a very studly character, and I'm glad the story is still alive.

I loved this story, easily one of my favs i would have loved to read about when alex found out jake and vince were gay that would have been hilarias !

LOVE YOUR WRITTING!

Fantastic story!


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It was the most totally awesome cliche. Everyone is happy together. Just a perfect happily ever after. You did have a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes. I'd be happy to fix them for you. No problem. I need something to do.

i just loved ur story ive sat here for like 3 hours reading the whole thing i felel in love with ur characther

i love it even though i only read part of chap on i love it but i gtg so read more later

totally totally totally love this story. made me want my own Alex.

Really good...and yeah a cross country story...yes i am a runner!

Anyway Alex is Corin's friend right?

I love this story, I love the whole brothers over protective thing, its oh so cute! Like you Im a sucker for happy endings, and I love how this one turned out!! Great job, can't wait to see more of your writing!! :D

Wow..

This is the third time I've read this story and I still love it! I don't think I'll ever grow tired of it =) it's just that good..

Great, great story! Thanks! Can't wait to read more from you in the future..

That was beautifully written, it was a pleasure to read!

Thanks
Michelle