Demon Eyes Kyo? XD J/K Love...I'm bein' a dork! XD At first I thought it said 'my first attempt at Hakuji' and was like...kinky. XD But great! Loved!

Morbid Maxwell-The more you hurt me, the more I love you.

hey, i thought this was pretty good, despite all your modesty. )

i like it...at a first attempt you did amazingly good...well done...i love it so much energy and power in it. lots of love AllyCred

Very sharp and piercing imagery. I like that, lends to the tone.

I am always up for reading anything that has a demonic twinge to it. But the fact that you downsized yourself so badly in your summary almost turned me away. You might want to update the summary a little, but other than that I enjoyed this. It leaves much to the mind to wonder just what depth of evil has the author within it's horrid glare and vice-like grip! Well done!

RoseSama35

I like this haiku, have never seen anything like it! Original, creepy, yet good! AWESOME!