I liked it, and if you ever finish it...I'll come back, read and rereview! Great job!

Morbid Maxwell-The more you hurt me, the more I love you.

*WOW*...OMG this is like the best poem i have ever read...flows amazingly and is just so powerful...well done. lots of love AllyCred

Hm...I like how short it is, and the word use is impressive.