|Reviews for Where are we Headed?|
| Empty Jigsaw 8/1/05 . chapter 1
A beautiful example of an extended metaphor used to question... everything really. This poem flows well, and the language is lyrical in line 'Everyone dying to know' struck me, as it could be applied literally to those we know have already fallen. Regards, Empty Jigsaw
| BlueRose218 7/20/05 . chapter 1
interesting, and well thought out, but a little erratic. good imagery, though, very artful.