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| D. A. Emme 2005-10-06 ch 1,   | Good poem. I liked it! I can relate to it somehow. Not sure how. Keep writing, and I'll try to keep reviewing. |
| Nebelfee 2005-08-07 ch 1, | sad and true (again) wonderful written, nice rimes! |
| Moon-Chaser 2005-06-28 ch 1, | I think that the last line has a spelling mistake. (Just saying...) I can see where you are coming from, some poems I have just put up are about a retreat at school. I go to a Christian School and it didn't turn out the way yours did. I'm glad that you enjoyed yours. This is a wonderful poem and I hope that you discover what you are hiding. But maybe you fear to?? Keep it up. |