Ok, I didn't actually read it. *hangs head in shame* BUT it was an awesome summary. :)

This is interesting. And I love that line, My control is the one thing I can't control. This story is pretty good, i cant think of any constructive critismn so good job! lol

AGH! I love this one, too! Even though you;re right, I don't get a a lot of the math bits...But I loved the black jack part!It's fantastic, wrapped inside a blanket of wonderful, with chocolate chip on top. :)

Cool! Keep up the good work!

I like this so far . . . I'm not quite sure what's happening (there's going to be more than one chapter, right?) but I really like your writing. Update soon!