Beautiful, beautiful abstractness. "He wants to be one of those human beings with disposable worlds" -- once again, you've hit home. I can relate to this, and there you are, putting it into the perfect words.

I want to be a solution for dissatisfaction too. =D

lovely and - i think i get it! or maybe i don't but my idea is that this guy is giving so much to be with this girl who just thinks of him as a quick **. just an idea. was going to pick out favourite lines but can't as there are too many.

Love the style of this and your other poems. You have great titles too.

My favorite line: "Shuddering at the tip of her tongue," like everything is revoluving around her, with a feeling of being insignificant in comparison.

Keep up the good work!

stunning. i love the second stanza. this is awesome.

this is just superb. abstract & concrete at the same time. beautiful, simply beautiful.

-salt.

'he wants to be one of those solutions for dissatisfaction' Brilliant! Love the imagery. Love way you used rejection notice's favorite word. Love/adore the poem.

awesome;y written... i like it