I really have missed your poetry. It's so enchanting.

Powerful repitition.

I love the sing-song and ironic attitude of the first two lines. I'm just a bit confused on who "they" are in the first stanza...

That's definitely my problem: "slipping thoughts together like certitude is going out of style."

very cool

amazing. the repitions worked phenomenally. your imagery is so exact- perfectly abstract and gorgeous.

Wow...this is amazing, really. "Choking on June." Love every word.~A. Person

intriguing. the images conjured don't merit the typical fictionpress poem - but then again, you are not the typical fictionpress writer. lovely.

-salt.

Your use of vocabulary was exquisite; thankfully there was only one word that I wasn't familiar with (perhaps that's a hint that I should read more). Anyway, I love that this can be interpreted in copious ways. I love the occasional repetition of sentences; it's perfected placed within the poem. Lovelylovely.

If I weren't so studious with my vocabulary this probably wouldn't have drudged up the contentedness it did; I love poetry that's so twisted with five-dollar words that it can be interpreted in many a way. But it has to mean something to everyone. And you pulled it off.

Oh yes. I adore the title.

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