this is beautiful. there is no other way to put it. it's a depressing beauty. and yes that was meant to be contradictory in my poem. heh, I stared at that line for a long time try to figure out how I could make it work and finally I did. my reasoning behind it is that inorder to be able to rid yourself fully of these demons you must embrace them first. acknowledge them, fall to them, before you can ever defeat them. and thank you for correcting my one mistake. i missed that one. my computer stopped checking my spelling which, as you can tell from these reviews I'm sure, I am horrendous at. I like this poem. it's kind of

i really like this poemthe idea of the stars bringing a sense of hope is similar to one of my poems

Wow. That flowed really well. It's a nice idea, too. Great job.

Very pretty and it makes me feel a little bit sad and sympathy (sp?) for the character.

(Thanks for the review. And I politely beg to differ. You can be your own worse critique)

Aw I love it.

Your right, its not depressing...just an overwhelming state of longing...

beautiful poem...

Aww I love this poem! Beautiful! Write on!

Anna