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| no.peace.los.angeles 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseFavorite line: "Love who you're with/I realize that's just a myth." Because it's so true, you can't love who you're with b/c you'll just make yourself miserable. Lovely poem. Keep writing! :) |
| Jasmine Mae 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abusethis rocks. :P it is very well written. |
| mystique auteur 2005-08-23 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sweet and I'm sure lot's of people can relate! Kinda confusing in parts but I really liked it. |
| XxDragon Princess NikkixX 2005-07-27 ch 1, | abuseOh wow! Thus was amazing! I really, really liked how this told a story rather than a list of random emotions. It flowed very well. Excellent job! |
| Stephanie (Risika) 2005-06-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, hun that's really great. I've written some poetry, but its not ever turned out like that. It has a great flow to it, and a great "story" to it. I love it. Congrats. |
| Princess-anna57 2005-06-27 ch 1, | abuseDeep! I love this! Fantastic! Write on! ~Anna~ |