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| AlwaysAmberella 2005-07-25 ch 1, | wow, this is so real that i got chills very awesome very well done. Solo. |
| Trajo 2005-07-03 ch 1, | awesomeness... the ending reminds me of boulevard of broken dreams by greenday. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-06-29 ch 1, | I love the flow. This is deep and very good. I love the ending. it was perfect ~Sorrow~ |
| pennaroyaltea 2005-06-28 ch 1, | whoa i can totally relate. the exsact same questions have been going through my head (september not febuary though.)and its almost painful how oblivious my family is. its hard to beleive they wouldnt supect something like that when i have been so secluded and unsocial these past few months. great poem. i love free verse so much so this was a breath of fresh air (i hate rhyming) --royal |
| charedice 2005-06-27 ch 1, | normally, I try not to say i felt the emotions in a poem, but.. you know, I did. so I may as well say it: I really, really felt the emotions behind this poem. It's really, really good. |
| Princess-anna57 2005-06-27 ch 1, | Wow, so sad, but so amazing and well written. Well done and write on! ~Anna~ |