Hey man. Finally got to read this. I liked the tests they had to go through. I'm guessing you got a lot of that from Ecco The Dolphin. Nice that some couples got to have some "fun" on the island. It's not looking good for Nu'Sara and Ai'a'ivea but that's my fault, :) Keep up the good work and have a good day.

Hey man. Good chapter with the kids' predicaments and the Qelas continued attack on the Enagi. Keep up the good work and have a good day, :)

Nice chapter, I liked the children being trapped, the Glocks' organization and Al-Harb's guerilla tactics for lack of a better term. The Mechanical was fun and very explosive. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work and have a good day, :)

Hey man. Nice chapter, I liked the Sisters attacking our heroes and all. Keep up the good work and have a good day, :)

Hey man. Read these chapters and I like them especially the group being on the run and the Collective. Payback amuses me with her fire, she reminds me of a rookie even though by now I wouldn't consider her one now especially after the events upcoming. I will say that my hero group will be running as well when I eventually get to it. Keep up the good work and have a good day, :)