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| War-and-Peace 2005-06-30 ch 1,   | "What she discovered/Was a new way to hate/Everything she used to love" This was a powerful line. I liked your poem, it was different than the usual "Life sucks I hate myself..DIEDIEDIE" of other angst poem.It was really good.And the fact that we have the same name gives you extra points =) |
| MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44 2005-06-27 ch 1, | WOW. That was beautiful. Please keep writing. |
| HauntedMisery 2005-06-27 ch 1, | This rocks, awesome work! |
| FunkyFlower17 2005-06-27 ch 1, | AWESOME! luv the rhyme scheme and excellent rhythm. vocab is amazing and the theme is pretty sad but heartfelt. well done and incredible work! going on my favs! |