aw..i'm very sorry :(
this piece is beautiful in its own way. i love it. maybe it's the 'tell me' parts of it. but it's really good.
and i can relate to the part at the top when you write what time it is and the date..i do that a lot, too :)
i don't know why, i just do. keep writing!
-vesta

Aww.. :( This piece really does show how so many people feel.. Love it. 10/10