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Reviews For: Crying
Insomni
2005-06-27
ch 1, 		abuseAnother short that makes a very nice read. You had a couple of repeats in words in some of your sentences, might want to go back and proof read it. Otherwise, very well done. Very good portrale of the character :) 8/10
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