this was awesome. very original. :)

nice. it could indeed be a bit more polished, as some of your other pieces could, but your personal style is there and it is still quite well done and very truthful.

Hey thats a nice one i don'nt fancy the end much but, thats just me

well said!

We all have an addiction that we just cant seem to shake, or don't want to. Writing is not the worst of them by any stretch of the imagination.

My addiction is to any fantasy world that interests me at the moment, to small rectangles of cardstock, and to twenty-sided dice.

Later...

amazing... I love the comparison.. this poem is really cool

I find this one funny. Maybe cause i had(HAD) my own drug problem, but thats just me.

Ooh! Complimentary cookies!! *stuffing pockets* Good way of putting your it, "your addiction". I guess the thought never really hit me that way.

cool. very cool. poetry is like, so way like this(god, i sound like such a prep, i'm really not, i promise. lol.) it's just great! i stayed up til like, 3 one night cuz i counldn't stop. awesomeness.

I am impressed that you wrote this nice, witty poem in just 5 mins. It's quite good and I know exactly what it means.

awesome poem!

I really like this how you corrolate an addiction to writing. I liked how you brought drug problems into the "problem" you have with writing. I'm aware that it's not a problem, but it's the same difference. That's what is ironic about it. Good job.

Interesting comparison, and it works. Well written.

Addiction is wierd...its wierd how you can become so into something...i like this...so true. Keep it up ^_^

I really like the clever idea and the imagry is great but the last stanza sort of messed up the flow for me. Great job, I really enjoyed it.