Well, it was good, but you might want to be careful about saying that she through her cellphone across the room. Metaphorically it’s fine, but physically, no.

I enjoyed this story very much...modernizations of old fables or myths or legends are always fun, and you carried this one off with flair and a shiny, brand new moral. Your dry sense of humor, coupled with the caricature of Larry's character, made this story quite amusing. Good job.

I liked the story, too. It gives a new take on things.

very funny. that was an interesting take on the story...it certainly provided me with some late-night amusement, in a morbid sort of way. very good, i commend you!