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scotti 2006-11-08 . chapter 1
Hello SinsUnknown or should I say Michael...Im sorry but my curioisty got the better of me and I hunted down some of you older stuff, hope you don't mind.

This one was abloultely ingenious. I really liked the idea that you have two different thoughts playing out here in this scene... sort of a 'right-hand-don't-let-the-left-one know what you're doing' kinda thing or perhaps a better example is 'heart-don't-let-the-mind know how you really feel about her'. It's different...I like different. This little short also has a lot of feeling packed behind the words you've written as well. Nice job Michael.

Well, I'm moving on to more of your 'secret' work so be on the look out. ~Scottie

PS. Out of all the different pen names you used, I have to say this one struck my fancy the most.
TheCryingGame 2005-06-27 . chapter 1
This was great. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Word, yo! ~TheCryingGame
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