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| fire-breathing-kitten 2005-07-01 ch 3,   | Very interesting and (I think) well written...I like your greater attention payed to the people and feelings rather than a series of events. |
| Pheurton Skeurto 2005-07-01 ch 3, | First off, thanks for reviewing my poem at such a speedy time! I only just post it and wow, a review! I quite like the auto biography, it seems very straight to the point while still giving a good description. Enough to give details, but not too much to bore the mind out of the reader! Try to make it a little longer though?Keep it up! :) |
| MercuryMoon 2005-06-28 ch 2, | Jazz band.. I'm an oboe player myself, so I can't do it. I really liked how you introduced the character, Orange. There's this romantic aura all around him and I'm drawn in to know what he's really like. |